She has no idea what she’s talking about when it comes to magic or justice lol
"I hope so, Sagres. You are walking a tightrope, and beneath it lies a bottomless abyss."
HP: Dangerous Professor from Azkaban
Book&Literature · DarkDevil1
The mc isn’t gonna start simping like your other novel right? Hiding his new element only to reveal it during the tournament to us readers doesn’t make sense. Like I get you want to surprise us but that’s not how a writer should go about it. It like your breaking the fourth wall without actually breaking it. You either do it or you don’t not hover in between. Asher doesn’t make sense to me rn cause strength is all that matters in this world but it’s like sometimes he goes all in on gaining power while other times he’s just aura farming doing nothing. Just give us a direction or purpose otherwise isn’t it meaningless?
That’s a simple view of character. Probably an adolescent level of philosophy of good and evil…
Lmao
"And once the paperwork is finalized, we will officially be on the same team!"
Harry Potter: The Necromancer of Hogwarts
Book&Literature · Dark_Peace
"I firmly believe that my existence will only have meaning once I have successfully absorbed and comprehended every single piece of knowledge that exists within this universe."
Harry Potter: The Necromancer of Hogwarts
Book&Literature · Dark_Peace
The writing is fine but the dialogue is terrible. The mc is just shocked or panicking anytime he speaks or reacts. The novel could have been great if the mc was more level headed and not so dramatic.
The writing quality is trash and the power system constantly changes names. The mc is a pushover and constantly states his emotions like a weirdo. Honestly he doesn’t know how to say no.
He is it’s already been confirmed earlier like 2 chapters ago
"Oh, come on, man. It's literally a concrete floor inside a building," Arthur muttered to himself, shaking his head in disbelief. "How the hell does a massive cloud of dust appear every single time someone takes a step or throws a punch?"
Rise Of The Villain : In a World Ruled By Anomalies
Fantasy · survivalArtist001
The writing style is decent but the dialogue is written bland and at a high school level. It’s alway “he said seriously” or something along those lines. The mc does nothing productive besides talk theory and maybe cast a spell he’s already learned one to twice after 90 chapters. His trades are nice but he doesn’t seem to always trade back with just taking devil fruits and stuff.. the whole getting crippled by the spear was unnecessary as a learning experience and just shows how stupid the mc is by treating a magical world as a playground. His discussions with the students are cringey just filler most of the time.
The plot is repetitive. The mc faces a powerful opponent, gets injured, recovers, gets revenge. The fights are mostly prolonged to the point of being dragged out. The mc personality is interesting but the world building is also rinse and repeat. The whole universe world building makes little sense and the power structure is inconsistent and scales without a consistent measuring system.
The Epic Tale of Chaos vs Order
Fantasy · Redsunworld