See, this comment isn’t even helpful for the author. It’s just straight up words.
…What are the odds that any kids of mine turn out like Yujiro Hanma?
Anime & Comics · Eternal_Yujin
Nah, this criticism isn’t even criticism. You’re just dunking on the MC because you don’t like his personality.
Trait: Hanma [Rare]
Anime & Comics · Eternal_Yujin
Nah, you’re lowkey right on this one.
I feel like this criticism is a little far fetched. You’re acting like this guy is going to straight up murder him when he’s done nothing to be perceived as harmful yet. A power difference is really all you can think of? You should consider relationships and the power they hold.
His black hair is cut short and neatly kept, making his ruby-red eyes stand out all the more. Save for his eyes and nose, he doesn't look like Mary much. His face is neutral, but there's a curiosity behind those dark eyes. I reach into my pocket and hold onto Riptide for reassurance. I'd be dead a thousand times over before I managed to even raise the blade… but holding the pen is still reassuring.
Anime & Comics · Eternal_Yujin
Why else do you think he fought those three muggers when he had no reason to? He figured out there was only one way to get more tickets, achievements.
Feat Achieved: Successfully Figure Out How the Chaos Gacha Works!
Anime & Comics · Eternal_Yujin
Wait, he’s hiding his power? I thought he did that because it wouldn’t be counted otherwise?
During the side-to-side jumps, he moved quickly, but purposefully kept his feet heavy, avoiding the explosive blur of speed he had used against the Sewer-Ghouls. He clocked in an impressive time, but nothing reality-breaking.
Anime & Comics · Peanut_Ink
Unholy Beings, eh? This sounds fit for Vampire Hunting.
Dark Souls - Allows the user to conjure a spear of lightning imbued with the power of the sun that they can throw as a projectile. This spear possesses penetrative power and deals increased damage against draconic entities and unholy beings.
Anime & Comics · GlassesSama
mao
When debris came too close, she used her Swirly Swirl Shield (Tentative Name) to block it as well.
Anime & Comics · Cypresss
GOATed.
"Affirmative," the AI replied smoothly. "Department Zero was established to recover, research, and securely contain anomalies that threaten reality, baseline physics, and human survival. Philosophy: Not everything dangerous should be eliminated. Some things must simply never be allowed to escape."
Anime & Comics · AaronLockes
This is actually such a brain dead take. He was literally JUST exposed.
"A few weeks before I graduated, I…" The boy paused, working carefully through his words. "Something happened to me. Inside, and out. I'm not sure how to say it, but…"
Naruto: Comeback Kid (Celestial Grimoire | OC-SI)
Anime & Comics · CleverPlotDevice