write stuff ya
the rest of this is gonna be so much better than this chapter just wait like a month and see
ch 0 1 Chapter One: Fresh Beginning
Fantasy · scarycereal
ill explain it later so dw
ch 0 2 Chapter 2: Strange World And Strange People
Just make it a bit slower ok, I'll try.
ok chapter could do better
I know I should praise my work but, I'm a beginner. I am just flat-out bad at this. My character development is mediocre at best and my pacing is a bit too fast. Right now I am writing chapter two, I will improve with time. Some of the strengths of my story are probably the worldbuilding and story. Take it with a chapter two point of view if you read this later. Also, my weaknesses are probably character development, pacing, and having a lot of motivation. I rate it 3.4/5. I am just a 14-year-old writing a cool story for fun after all. Don't spend your coins on this for now, I don't want you to waste money on me.
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the rest of this is gonna be so much better than this chapter just wait like a month and see
ch 0 1 Chapter One: Fresh Beginning
Journey Across
Fantasy · scarycereal