mercurystarship

mercurystarship

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Why did the starship break up with the comet? It needed space!

2023-11-26 Joined Global
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mercurystarship
mercurystarship
5 months ago
Replied to Iseeyou

Props to you! Keep putting in the hard work. My only suggestion is to read some well-written books and research how to improve writing characters and dialogues. You'll definitely get better over time.

mercurystarship
mercurystarship
5 months ago
Posted

I'm not sure if the author will keep my review, but here it is: This story felt flat and uninspiring to me. The characters and writing seemed hollow and lacked depth. I've never seen 'The 100', so I don't know the characters, but what I read didn't make me want to keep going. I think the author has potential to improve.

mercurystarship
mercurystarship
5 months ago
Posted

I haven't watched Game of Thrones, so I only know about it from other fanfics. This one is well-written and interesting. There are a few things I'm not clear on, and some parts I don't agree with, but I'm still intrigued and want to read more. Overall, it's pretty good.

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mercurystarship
mercurystarship
5 months ago
Posted

Even though the fic has some questionable scenes, it starts off pretty well. The system aspect is a bit confusing and not very straightforward. I'm also unsure if I'll like the harem style the author is aiming for with Rudeus. But overall, it's an above-average read.

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mercurystarship
mercurystarship
5 months ago
Posted

The idea behind it is interesting, but the way it's done isn't great. It's just okay, not amazing. Maybe give it a shot if you're out of other things to read.

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mercurystarship
mercurystarship
5 months ago
Commented

I suspect Magnus's suicide may have somehow played a role in the alteration of Van's passive skill, 'Untrusted'.

'Ah... What's with these two...? I don't think they even wanted to touch me with a stick before...'

Betrayed, I Met The Demon Lord

Betrayed, I Met The Demon Lord

Fantasy · Hazy_0832

mercurystarship
mercurystarship
5 months ago
Commented

ChatGPT FTW.

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mercurystarship
mercurystarship
5 months ago
Posted

I was really let down by this story, especially after enjoying the author's other work, 'Anti-NTR Man.' Initially, it seemed like it was heading in a direction I liked, but it quickly took a turn for the worse. It felt like the story gave me hope and then just crushed it. I'm giving it 3 stars because the writing itself is solid, but honestly, I'm pretty disappointed.

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mercurystarship
mercurystarship
6 months ago
Posted

This DBZ fanfic is pretty solid. It's got a cool premise that I haven't seen much of before, which kept me hooked. Shoutout to the author for their work, and good luck to them! I'm gonna let some more chapters pile up before I jump back in.

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mercurystarship
mercurystarship
6 months ago
Commented

Seriously awesome stuff.

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