I'm not sure if the author will keep my review, but here it is: This story felt flat and uninspiring to me. The characters and writing seemed hollow and lacked depth. I've never seen 'The 100', so I don't know the characters, but what I read didn't make me want to keep going. I think the author has potential to improve.
I haven't watched Game of Thrones, so I only know about it from other fanfics. This one is well-written and interesting. There are a few things I'm not clear on, and some parts I don't agree with, but I'm still intrigued and want to read more. Overall, it's pretty good.
Even though the fic has some questionable scenes, it starts off pretty well. The system aspect is a bit confusing and not very straightforward. I'm also unsure if I'll like the harem style the author is aiming for with Rudeus. But overall, it's an above-average read.
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The idea behind it is interesting, but the way it's done isn't great. It's just okay, not amazing. Maybe give it a shot if you're out of other things to read.
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I suspect Magnus's suicide may have somehow played a role in the alteration of Van's passive skill, 'Untrusted'.
'Ah... What's with these two...? I don't think they even wanted to touch me with a stick before...'
Fantasy · Hazy_0832
ChatGPT FTW.
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Fantasy · Hazy_0832
I was really let down by this story, especially after enjoying the author's other work, 'Anti-NTR Man.' Initially, it seemed like it was heading in a direction I liked, but it quickly took a turn for the worse. It felt like the story gave me hope and then just crushed it. I'm giving it 3 stars because the writing itself is solid, but honestly, I'm pretty disappointed.
This DBZ fanfic is pretty solid. It's got a cool premise that I haven't seen much of before, which kept me hooked. Shoutout to the author for their work, and good luck to them! I'm gonna let some more chapters pile up before I jump back in.
Seriously awesome stuff.
Props to you! Keep putting in the hard work. My only suggestion is to read some well-written books and research how to improve writing characters and dialogues. You'll definitely get better over time.
The 100: Sky King
TV · Iseeyou