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this sentence ends a bit weirdly, is the “get” meant to not be there or is the sentence missing a word?
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good question! i’d like to know my self actually
ch 127 Exploration [2]
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“necromance” is missin an “r” here
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typo here, “knigth” should be “knight”
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kiera x julien 🙏🙏🙏🙏
ch 119 Trip [2]
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“the to” should be “to the”
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ohhh i see. hope the time expectations don’t pressure you too much, it’s okay to take longer on chapters or take breaks. we’ll be waiting 🫡
ch 114 Different but the same [4]
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really love your emotional story telling approach throughout the novel entrail. this chapter was amazing!!! although, i feel like the story about the 10 inverted sky kids could have been fleshed out with more screen time, in order to feel more impactful, like the ending to the last acting arc was. nevertheless, this was still great. tftc entrail 🙏🙏🫡🫡
ch 114 Different but the same [4]
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last word should be “fast” i think?
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kiera x julien continues to brew 🙏🙏
Staring into her deep red eyes, I was momentarily taken aback by her appearance. It went without saying that her looks were on another level.
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peak peak peak peak peak
ch 107 Labyrinth [2]
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happy 100 chapters 🥳🥳🥳
ch 100 Team [1]
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is “thread” supposed to be “tread”?
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missing the word “work”
"That won't anymore. I've temporarily locked the space around us."
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See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola
ch 95 Phecda [1]
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unnecessary “the” here in the last sentence
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