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Replied to GloryOfTheDark thanks for all the input I have dislectia myself so these kinds of mistakes will probably keep on happening because I write it as I hear it so if you find another spelling mistake please point it out I will do my best to correct it.
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Replied to GloryOfTheDark yeah that's my fault put down the word for baby in my mother language i will fix it
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Replied to GloryOfTheDark yeah a friend of mine said the same. I tried to do it for the old chapters but it is possible I missed some I will go over them again tomorrow
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Replied to GloryOfTheDark thank you for the input you are right. i changed the storyline a bit concerning the nanobots so it is not important anymore i shall remove it
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is it possible to include the names and description of some of the scp's when introducing them. it's hard to follow otherwise like with scp 1555 until this chapter I have no idea what it is haven't read through the full chapter yet but it would be much appreciated if a short summary would be added for every scp either new marvel ones or old ones
ch 11 Enter Bruce Banner. -10
Marvel: The Foundation
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