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TommyGunn0916
Thank you for the feedback I’ll look back and try to change up some things and make it more cohesive and less cluttered. I’m a first time writer so I’m still learning as I go
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The Reaction System
Fantasy · TommyGunn0916
TommyGunn0916
Just wait until you see what’s to come,I think you’ll like what I’m cooking.
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The Reaction System
Fantasy · TommyGunn0916
TommyGunn0916
Thank you for the compliment, it is very much appreciated. I’m going to work hard to provide a good experience for everyone reading. I can’t wait until you see what I have cooking up 😁
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original The Reaction System
Jin Aldeus was a normal man, no powers, no special talent…. Just normal. Long before this time the world was flooded with mana by a mysterious entity, this event soon became known as the awakening. Soon after the awakening a species of monsters known as Reapers began appearing around the world destroying everything they touch. They come in many grotesque forms and even different species and types. Not long after humans began being born with special abilities due to the mana that flooded the planet. Eventually they started to fight back and these brave warriors became known as Hunters. When a simple ultra sound appointment turns bad Jin discovers through the trauma of losing his wife and unborn daughter, he had a hidden power within himself all along.14 Chs 25 Collections
Thank you very much for the feedback. I will definitely check out your novel and give you feedback as well. I hope you’re enjoying the novel so far and hope you continue to enjoy the Reaction System.
The Reaction System
Fantasy · TommyGunn0916