TheScriptMan

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it's pretty good, honestly. Although every single character does seem to be more interesting than the protagonist.

ch 26 Author's Note:

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I hit the ground in a slide, my hand scraping the earth. "Chidori!" The air around my hand buzzed with blue electricity, lighting up my face in an eerie glow. I was a human storm, charging forward, the earth cratering under my feet from the force.

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TheScriptMan

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Happy christmas 🎄

ch 23 Chapter Twenty Two: Before The Crash (Part IV)

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TheScriptMan

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What tradition? I guess, opening gifts on Christmas Eve, and then Santa’s gift Christmas morning.

ch 21 Chapter Twenty: Before The Crash (Part II)

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[https://ibb.co/g4XnwvW]

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"Ill carry it for as long is my burden to bear.", I continued, my voice a stranger's. And then, to my horror, I felt myself drop to one knee, "You have my sword".

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TheScriptMan

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Good story. But the other characters POV seems to be so much more interesting than the protagonist. Like, the one scene with Neji's dad is so much better than the entire scape thing earlier.