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Suggestions to make a different story: #no_harem. 1: don't give him any travel ticket (never). 2: let him train in his own universe. 3: you don't need to give him good things from Gacha always. Give him food or even some trash or normal thing like a book or a pen. 4: make some weakness for him.

You say that yourself, it was Chinese.

Suggestions: 1: you are going too fast, make it slower. 2: you have a little problem in your sentences, use (,) in your sentences. 3: you shouldn't give him so many thing. 4: he is just normal, right? So why he absorbed them so fast, because they're trained people, not normals. You can understand that most of the novel's problem is that your speed is fast, and you don't think on it that much it's needed. I hope that maybe this comment was helpful.

There is no hope. This novel become another Chinese novel rip off.

Keep going.

Good job.

Nice.

I got a bad feeling with this chapter.

Is he don't have any plan for cap(Steve)?

Man, this is so dramatic. It's really hard to continue with this type of writing. Can you please make it a little less dramatic?

You can add these: #invincible #action #hero #Reincarnation #adventure And so many else, and you can add #dc #marvel # Naruto but you should tell in your novel's summary that this is just invisible and they will know and just don't give you a low star review. And your novel is have a few conversations work on it and use this for 'though ' and "conversations " and this —this if you don't want to just repeat names for people. 👏😄

You put #dc and I think about it if they are not doomed are not.

You this is just invisible and nothing else?

Is there viltrum empire? And if they're how much is their power?

Oh, so it was DNA 😐 and we have a long conversation about it 😄 you're doing well,author. But if he erase him(joker), what will happen?

In some old comic I read that she can have a normal life every 100 year's and in one of them she is having a bar.

I didn't talk about that Fanfiction.

I searched this and what I found was: 1: lazarus pit (that I think this is b*s*) 2: that joker is the symbol of horror and a symbol can not die.

You have one problem here and that's the conversation. For now work on this.