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Is this story on Hiatus? It hasn’t updated in a bit

This story just made Risers path to power to fast and way way way way to easy. Like playing a game on super easy mode it got boring fast. The relationship progression boiled down to plot armor cause it wasn’t existent. Basically girls love MC cause he’s MC type deal. No effort required this story isn’t for me. I like fiction with more substance nice effort though

Author have you read the source material for this? The Anime may have made it look planned but Rias had no idea who Issei was before the fact. Issei got one of her fliers by chance. She had no idea he had a sacred gear until after she resurrected him. She didn’t plan it ahead of time and she wasn’t desperate for peerage members at this point because she wasn’t aware of the rating game option until after Grayfia told her during her meeting with Riser.

Thanks for the new chapter. Wish these chaptera were a bit longer

I’ll delete this off my read list now. Spent the last 5 chapters just hoping for the MCs death. Time to move on to another story

I kept trying I just can’t stomach this anymore. Nothing makes sense

ella vino sin otra razón que el personaje principal es el personaje principal

Yes its shown in multiple times in cannon satans hav hilariously large mountains of paperwork and their really isn’t anything extraordinary about a Longinus user able to beat lowest level cannon fodder

So far he hasn’t handed anything over to the 3 factions that wasn’t already replicated in cannon. The Khaos Brigade manufactured artificial Phoenix tears and had been selling them on the black market for a while for funding purposes. If Azezal looked they’d probably be there now. Nobody freaked out about it then it wasn’t even a plot point till later on when they kidnapped Ravel. Think your over playing this alchemist reaction a bit to much.

The alchemist that hasn’t really done anything significant? The one that when given the opportunity refused to join her faction? She goes to parent teacher conferences cáuse she’s a siscon highly doubt anything is as important to her as Sona

Why would Serafall the Satan in charge of foreign affairs catch a stray Devil for random unifiliated human? She showed up last chapter to thank him for protecting himself from so low level grunts who are barely low class in strength. She must have literally nothing to do

That sounds cool

He should essentially just be power gaming and building up harem members at this point. In the end that’s what will help him the most.

I liked this story better before MC started trying to become powerful on his own. A lot of focus on the unnecessary. He should have just built a strong harem and slept them do the grunt work.

For all the effort Ethan took to go to school it had hurt his progress more then helped him. He had this big obsession in the beginning with going to the academy he would hav been farther along haf he just become an adventure

MC is kind of an evil sociopath he’d have trouble working with angels I think

Think this would have flowed better had he just joined Rias in chapter 5. The relationships would have made more sense. Don’t think anything we s gained by waiting if he plan all along was for a race change anyway. He would have had to join her earnestly and not be a sociopath about it going about life with his fingers crossed behind his back though. Nothing wrong with an MC being genuine. Not a mindless follower but genuine relationships with earned affection flows better. Way better then Akeno randomly showing up just to fuck the MC out of nowhere. Felt like I skipped about 20 chapters to get to that scene. I know you think writing those daily interactions are boring but relationship building is important. It would also make more sense if he has a friendly relationship with any of the satans moving foward. If you have a good understanding of the peerage characters from the LN none of them are just going to show up to fuck a random human no matter how potentially useful he could be in the future. While definitely sensual in nature none of them were really massive sluts. Rias waited till after Issei had proposed when he became a high class Devil and Akeno was about the same. I understand they aren’t going to be the exact same as their cannon counterparts but thì Akeno i think is better placed in a Smut fic

Hope this returns soon. Excited to see what happens next

He just doesn’t feel genuine I guess can’t really explain it. Like A high functioning sociapath. That’s mostly from your comments on him not r see really joking anyone. Makes it seem fake. I’ll be your friend kind of but I’ll only ever be on my own side kind of deal