I pretty liked it but this doesn't matches to the characteristics given by kishimoto about nawaki since he died with a single blow in anime don't know much about manga though. Your imagination is pretty cool about a senju successor, very well keep it up
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I pretty liked it but this doesn't matches to the characteristics given by kishimoto about nawaki since he died with a single blow in anime don't know much about manga though. Your imagination is pretty cool about a senju successor, very well keep it up
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