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read till chapter 20, overall a solid cotexhikigaya fanfic. good work author and keep updating more. its so good and probably one of the best hikigaya depiction in an ff out there. tho kinda hope in future yukino and the rest of snafu caste can also appear. idk how but hopefully author can pull something. but anyway good work this fanfic

This is really a good novel with absolutely OP mc, if u like mc like Anos and his opness then you will love him. heck later on he even is so strong to negate the power of END and even has the physiology to have immunity to all form of Nonexistence power with abstract and meta reality powers as well. Mc even has beauty embodiment as well, just by him existing, he can green hat any guy and his beauty and charm even applies on guys to a degree too passively (if he were to actually use this power, no gender matter, they will love and worship him). Mc went from weak human to the strongest vampire progenitor to create a new race and became the Primogenitor of the Blood Dragons which is the perfect merge of True Dragon Progenitor (who literally have power to distort reality and 50% of the entire creation) and Vampire Progenitor (who can control and destroy souls and even consume souls and gain there power, memories, abilities, etc) then when he turned to a God he became a true God of Chaos and also gained Eldritch Powers (its still not explained how and why he got eldritch powers which are said to be from an entirely different cosmology [Check the aux chapters]). Its unknown if he will have any more drastic evolution or even make a new race thats even stronger then Outer Gods but regardless it will be interesting as he progress his power and understand more about his other essence. Even as he became a god and gained that eldritch essence, it was shown to have power to create and alter galaxies as it eat them in a dimension which is inside of Victor that holds countless galaxies. Victor absolutely slams everyone in the novel, even tho he started weak and was rash (which is to be expected, he was very young), later on around chapter 670 and above he already has the power to effect the entire planet. and even more as you would expect with the evolutions i mentioned. Victor absolutely slams everyone in the novel, even tho he started weak and was rash (which is to be expected, he was very young), later on around chapter 600_ he already has the power to effect the entire planet. and even more as you would expect with the evolutions i mentioned. As for the mtw cosmology as a whole, we still have A LOT of questions left to be answered, as on chapter 1021, Victor True Dragon form is already has the power and size to hold the entire solar system in one hand and his senses can explore vast expanses of countless galaxies in the sector (the Universe is divided into 3 Sectors, Low Level, Mid Level and High Level; its currently unclear if every sector is its own Universe class space because in a fight later on, we did see the edge of the Universe and the fight had happened in the Low Level Sector but its stated that Higher Sector is just a a far bigger space then Mid Level Region which is a bit confusing. Author could really do a better job exploring this.). There was also an extra chapter which gave us glimpse of what future Victor would be capable off and oh boy it was a lot. Tho i have a feeling that the Extra chapter Victor we saw wasnt even his final power either as it was shown that Victor was still growing and 'Protecting' his cosmology and records for his wives which holds there past-present-future, Victor himself has transcended the records, so that by proxy grants him complete immunity to Fate, Information, Knowledge, Erasure manipulations and things of that nature. Victor is stated to be completely Omnipotent, Omnipresent and Omniscient in the entire MTW cosmology and that isn't even the full power either as there are supposedly infinitely many cosmology which are created by there [Primordial Chaos], overall its insane power level for a novel whose primarily focus was actually romance, slice of life with yandere. One Major Flow i have with this novel is the harem which literally interested me to read in the first place (yea pretty ironical). The harem in this novel in the most basic way i can explain is, its HUGE. Like so many wives and in future the daughters who are confirmed to join the harem as well, there are so many women around mc, this harem aspect is legit turning into the thing author hates the most in novel, its turning into a cultivation big harem Pokemon collector, which is extremely sad. I am sure author himself knows that he did kinda fkd himself over with adding so many women in the harem later on (around chapter 700, his harem escalated to two times and even more were added later on). and to add to the injury, since he will add the daughters as well, even more pokemons will join later on, even tho its totally predictable that the daughters would have joined regardless because there dad is literally perfect and the strongest, and this novel preface that without strength, it does not matter what ur cause is, you will absolutely get shted on in supernatural world. And in supernatural world, something like incst is minor af. also in the topic of incst, yes mc's mother also joins his harem much later on in the story so expect that as well. dk about other readers but i personally feel like even if you kill off multiple characters in vic harem, the plot wont even change since most of them literally stay at the background (don't actually kill them tho, i don't like harem getting killed for mc being incompetent type of plot or forgetting memory type of stuff.) Dont make our giga chad mc a manwhoe and have legit any women who showed interest in him be added just coz they have some faction or army that could help Victor. Victor doesn't need things like that, he alone can basically wipe floors with 99% of the being in the novel who have been mentioned till now and i dont see mc have any difficult fight like the one he had with Erebus, Tartarus and Nocturnos gave him, he is just that strong now. I remember back then in confrontation, he was one of the preacher of gender equality in fights and kills but now seemingly all women gets spared, his gore and macabre aspect of fight is also lost now. I hope things can be fixed later on. I sincerely mean it as a fan of this novel author please hold yourself back and know your own writing limit, its simply not feasible as an author to make more then 50 wives have actual substance and care put into them. Not a single harem novel out there exist which has done such a big harem and successfully give enough character development for every single one of them. Please stop before it truly becomes equivalent to a cultivation harem novel trash. Keeping women around mc is one thing but keep adding them in mc harem is another. Victor as the mc and the supreme god should have standards and not just add any walking pus*ies in the harem, heck even be added to harem doesn't mean anything when the novel doesn't even show any actual s*x and the ones that are shown are so far in between and if that is how you want to do it, then just don't keep adding women left and right. This is a message to author: i dont know if you will read this or not but i am a really big fan of your novel and really want the best for you as an author to succeed and deliver a good novel and by the end you can be proud of your own creation. Don't destroy the goodwill of your readers by making simple mistakes again and again by continuously skipping the actual romance aspect and keep adding random women who really just always fade into background like mizuki, victoria and most of the maids and demon wives, maya, carmilla etc (all the ignored womens who are already in the harem). these girls really need to become powerful and actually have substance and have actual impact in the story. You have to make victor interact more with all of his wives and spend chapter with all the named wives and give actual heartwarming and actual romance plot and dates with the girls. the wives show there difficulty and make there connection with mc and the readers stronger. Not some random 'i find him handsome and strong and i want him to be my husband and done' type of things. I understand fully just how truly overpowered the concept of beauty embodiment and so many divinity that function to further amplify mc paive attraction really is but victor as the mc should have clear boundaries and standards for women. this is truly a disservice to victor as the mc and how strong he is, his wives should also have the same quality and depth. Even now you truly just focus on violet, ruby, sasha, scathach, and latest addition be velnorah and jeanne is also there and anna in the lower end. characters as h*y ones like natashia, aphrodite and the rest now are just background now due to no segs of ecchi moment with anyone in the actual story and all just get skipped. Anyway i did ramble a bit and in the end its your choice of how you want to progress your novel but just know these are your prevalent shortcomings when it comes to romance and harem aspect of the story which you had initially a**ed pre 500 chapters mind you. its not like you don't know how to write romance, even though even earlier like 300 chapter wasnt what i would call perfect romance plot but it was still better then what shallow wives vic is getting, like amaterasu and the rest, they all are basically equivalent to gold diggers of modern world, victor is the best, strong, handsome, wealthy so they want him which is kinda sad. i always get the feeling like, if victor were to ever lose his status of what he has right now, majority of his new wives would just leave him since they were literally attracted to his overall status and power and beauty. In reality i would have given this ovel like 4-4.2 but i will just give it a 5 coz in the end this is still one of my fav novel and i want it to do well.

Pretty good novel. Vampires in this novel are truly EXTREMELY powerful. tho i will say this. This novel does bombard with a lot of info and has big paragraphs of pure info dump so depending on if u like proper explanation of powers or just small mention it may be hit or miss for you. This novel is already multiverse level with just sub 40 chapters. Tho its done pretty well. it does explain how things work out so overall it is very gud.