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Kaelus_23

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2023-12-27 Joined Australia

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So this is my first time to do a review and honestly i may say some nonsense here but yeah bear with me the writing quality is good i gave it a 5 star because how the author uses some words in the novel in a standard way not an informal one and i love that its not the way when you read some stpd stuff like "hey, yeah im gonna be some edgy guy sht" type of way an author described and write some characters like a 12 yrs old in wattpad or smtn and the story development i also gave it a five because although the pacing was kinda rush but at the same time is not because of how amazing the author uses their words in this novel anyways the character design was 5 also because the way author described Itachi was so ancanny to the original the way he thinks and the way was his actions are are portrayed in this story was 10/10 and the power scaling author made Itachi in this story is so good hes not your typical op mc or some beta whatever you spelled that what meant hes not an op mc or weak mc because the author here written Itachi as he should in the original not too powerful but not too weak hes the balance and we dive in to the updating stability am gonna be brutal honest im really happy because i stumbled upon this gem story but the downside is that the updating stability is whole crap like i mean the author rlly takes eternity to update this story (imean no offence to the author) im too impatient to wait till the author update im not pressuring you or anything but please just don't update like a one week or something im rlly im dieying waiting that long, back to the review the world background was ok for me idk what to write here as i am satisfied with the work author did here overall my only problem was the shtty update please just please dont update like one or two weeks i really like your work author 🥲🥲 (anyways im sorry for my English if it had a fault here cuzz its not my 1st language so forgive my crappy english here😘)

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