Your story is interesting, the topic choice is unique. The wording is getting better. Honestly, I don't really understand English, but in my opinion, this story should be read by fiction enthusiasts. I'm curious about the continuation of the story. I hope you can keep creating so that your readers can soon get the continuation of the story! Keep up the spirit!
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Your story is interesting, the topic choice is unique. The wording is getting better. Honestly, I don't really understand English, but in my opinion, this story should be read by fiction enthusiasts. I'm curious about the continuation of the story. I hope you can keep creating so that your readers can soon get the continuation of the story! Keep up the spirit!
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Fantasy · bubblebleidd