I think in game of thrones it was pretty clearly established that intelligence is a rarity. Almost everyone acts impulsively on emotions and wants...
The mc is very frustrating, he has shitloads of money yet doesn't spend on almost anything citing "it has better uses". He is a smooth brained environmentalist who believes that investing in Tesla equates to saving earth. The list goes on and on but it comes down to him making money that he just holds without buying something personal, ffs it took more than 300 chapters just to buy a normal car despite having billions.
Yeah, I was a patron till last month.
When her gaze finally met his, the noise in the room seemed to fall away.
Vikings : Bjorn Reborn
Movies · DragonChiLL
Could be amazing if the grammar and punctuation were fixed.
She wasn't born yet, obviously AI written...
"Morning, little storm," I said gently, using the nickname I had given her in Braavos when the rain leaked through the roof and she cried because the thunder sounded like Father laughing.
Game of Thrones: Daeron The DragonKing
TV · vir_nan
It's readable if you want a protagonist who has no challenges, his starting gifts are way too overpowered. Furthermore the whole story is redundant, you wrote that he has a huge dragon that he can pull out of his ass anytime. Why not do so during the rebellion and just finish the story there?
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A) Keep Daenerys as the sole female lead, full monogamous endgame, no emotional competition.
Game of Thrones: Daeron The DragonKing
TV · vir_nan
Foundations of a rotten house must be destroyed for it to rise anew.
Classic Aegon the Conqueror reboot: three dragons (once Dany's hatch), field of fire 2.0, "bend the knee or burn."
Game of Thrones: Daeron The DragonKing
TV · vir_nan
Very cool and unique concept, looking forward to more chapters. Only improvement would be better proofreading.
Conquering Westeros by cheating my blessing system
TV · areusrules