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I like it

ch 19 More talent?

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Small jumps in time would be very good but not as strong. They show how he trains and learns spells but also how the story develops. Jumps in time would be very good but not as strong. They show how he trains and learns spells but also how the story develops and his personality During this time

ch 18 First class, again.

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Nice

ch 16 For the greater good!

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I didn't expect that now Will he go to Durmstrang? I would be very happy to see a story like that. Someone goes to school in Durmstrang and not just in Hogwarts

ch 15 Fight and kill. That is all.

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ch 13 School life & new class!

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Why

ch 46 C46 Recap

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If he starts his own group they all follow him would be really cool

ch 10 Finally at school? Or not?

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what year are we currently writing?

ch 0 9 Hunting! And to school!

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nice

ch 0 7 School start! Can I go back?

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I was surprised that someone from Germany wrote something and it was good, but the rest can pack it in, we show that Germans can also write very good works