Webnovel Author: THE_LAST_DEMON_ - Fanfic Collection

WELL I LIKE IT , IT'S MORE OF A SLICE OF LIFE THEN ACTION AND I DON'T HAVE ANY OPENION ON THAT JUST DO SOME TIME SKIP AND MOST OF THE TIME IT'S ABOUT MUTENT ATLEAST MENTION SOME MORE MCU CHARACTERS SUCH AS IRON MAN DURING THE DESTRUCTION HE CAUSED DURING SAVING HIS NEWPEW BY THE FACULTY

Well i just read it and it was good in sense just why you dropped it you could have continued and could have skipped divinity part for a while and send him to marvel universe the only training he did was during my hero academia arc and rest was all from gaccha , well i can't complain well good one

bro MC is like " I don't like supernatural problems but wanted to take all girls in his harem and why did he choose DXD world if hated trouble"

Well start was good but power level is messed up timeline messed up all girls falling for MC for no reason MC giving himself soft NTR a girl fallen in love with MC joins marine for him he is like i have no idea you are in love with me after he goes out for 6 months the girl got in love with other men and bears his child

I'm writing my first official novel and i will continue this till the end unlike my other in which i stopped at chapter 5 because that novel has a very similar novel with 100's of chapter so please tell me about my mistake in this novel and next world you want and i will make adult Tessia as main heroine