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Omniscient god right here
The huge illusion of the Bronze Book snapped shut with a thud, engulfing the Bronze Dragon within, then rapidly shrank back onto the podium as an actual Bronze Book with a distinct sound. The physical Bronze Book then closed.
Foreign Land Reclamation By a Vegetable-growing Skeleton
Games · Love eventually flows like water
I think other than the spelling errors the story itself is very interesting, it's a bit chaotic and very fast paced but still very good.
Tonight he would do a rutial that would allow him to gain an oath…even though he barely understood anything about the oath itself he still had Miss Daly to teach him, she had promised that she would teach him once he got an oath since that would have been easier to understand.
Grave borne Revenant
Fantasy · Alan_Grimlord
Tonight he would do a [ritual]
Tonight he would do a rutial that would allow him to gain an oath…even though he barely understood anything about the oath itself he still had Miss Daly to teach him, she had promised that she would teach him once he got an oath since that would have been easier to understand.
Grave borne Revenant
Fantasy · Alan_Grimlord
Bargi [slugged] Elijah [on] his left side
While running Bargi appeared next to Elijah dust clouds followed behind him. The two locked eyes all Elijah saw was an empty set of eyes ready to Eliminate its enemy. Bargi sluged Elijah in his left side, which sent him flying a few feet away.
Grave borne Revenant
Fantasy · Alan_Grimlord
'board' probably not 'broad' games
Amala perched her chin, "I think I will stay up a little longer. I don't wanna miss out on this night," She said cheerfully. The night continued with drinks and games; Bargi beat Daly and Amala in two broad games.
Grave borne Revenant
Fantasy · Alan_Grimlord
I think it should be 'congratulate' not 'conglutinate'
"Good, after I change, let's go conglutinate her," Amala said; she walked down the long halls and then to her room, which was in a different wing than the normal rooms. After she entered, she went over to her couch and sat down, her face covered in sweat. "How could a person be corrupted so much but has yet to die?, who is keeping him alive?".
Grave borne Revenant
Fantasy · Alan_Grimlord
I feel bad for Farhad poor guy has been used and abused by everyone
"Captai…n… why?" Farhad asked as he dropped to the floor while clutching his chest. "You won't die from such injury." She said, before shouting in the air.
The God of Jesters
Horror · GoGo