That! I fixed it the next chapter. Please endure I did improve in my format
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Fantasy · Xand3r
What was confusing about the chapter? I would like feedback so I can fix it
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Fantasy · Xand3r
Don't lathel is a dumb damsel
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On the top floors of the coliseum, in one of the private rooms, a beautiful woman with a scar on her cheek watched the scene with interest and glee.
Fantasy · Xand3r
Early mistakes, I'll be sure to adjust it. Thanks for the feedback
For example the strongest system, the entire system, the villain system and the most common or rather one of the pillars of the system; the Death system[ Sung jin woo<solo levelling>]
Fantasy · Xand3r
Yes, I did I was tired of the word monsters and beasts.
ch 16 Welcome Shinra
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Yeah I am
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Dm on facebook and ill help you. Here's my name Kà Lex
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Great novel just needs a but of cleanup. And please we need a cover
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Femboy
He is 5"5, with a very slender body and he has beautiful long red hair, his facial features are a bit delicate and similar to that of a woman.
Rogue's Ascendance
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