streak... yes. . steak... no..
"You should complete your tasks as soon as possible instead of playing with these clowns." A steak of sword light appeared in the dark sky and the figure of a handsome Swordsman became clear — It was the strongest swordsman under Jun.
Eastern · Cryo_Knight
Having trained as hard as this guy did. The drive to survive is stronger than anything you have put here. Having been beaten to death and then revived to endure beatings for years after that minor stuff is everything except being killed again.
ch 31 Survivalist
Fantasy · RighteousFilth
them works better than they
Everyone had now considered those the planes of immortals... untouchable by mortals such as they.
Fantasy · RighteousFilth
brake .. is to slow down.. break.... is to be damaged..
"Your fiancé got his sword broken while fighting? Is he alright?" Alex asked, surprised because he knew when someone's sword brake fighting, their chances of survival were very thin.
Games · Aibek
hale is spelled hail. when referring to ice
(Minor Hale Storm)- Cover the area in a small Hale Strom.
Games · Aibek
looking. ..yes.. locking... no..
Alex reached the first one of four mini-bosses; it was a snow wolf standing 7ft tall, locking nothing like an Elite version of his species.
Games · Aibek
wolves is plural not wolfs
"You guys can kill wolfs if you want to, but I will not be going with you," Alex replied to Badger, not even considering the offer of fighting with them and making less progress than he can do alone.
Games · Aibek
This is a great read. Characters well formed with their own views on their world and family. Thank you for writing with enough passion to stir rainbows from my eyes to run down my cheeks. Real feelings and respect accordingly in this story. This is definitely equal with the best here and anywhere else too. Well done thank you for your creation here.
ch 40 Hammer For All Seasons [Part 2]
Fantasy · Elyon
A great story full of different characters who are relative to the story with very real persona's. A gentle build in plot and their situations. This is more than a little thought provoking. Most arcane work is accurate one way or another.
ch 36 Ch 36: The Librarian
Fantasy · DurcalAka
they were. ...not good enough.. that were.... yes
These sheets were frayed at the edges and had yellowed with age, and they provided detailed information about the two items they were placed beside.
Fantasy · DurcalAka
was. ..no.. was.. . yes
"You see that as disgraceful? Bitch, you're crazy! All I see is blinding manliness bursting forth!" another onlooker retorted, clearly impressed by Valerius's resolve. He didn't care who he waa offending because he had quite a solid backing himself.
Fantasy · DurcalAka
quiten....no. . quieten.... yes
"Quiten down!"
Fantasy · DurcalAka
of.... what is this?
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Fantasy · Realm_Weaver
boyswed time? OK what did you really mean to be here?
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Fantasy · Realm_Weaver
the torture was bad. the results are amazing great story. Soo close to reality without real horror.
ch 15 Chapter 15: Neo-Nephilim
Fantasy · Realm_Weaver
Great stuff. Some of this is closer to the truth than most can imagine. Having 4 pairs of DNA strands instead of two for example.
ch 0 8 Chapter 8: Blood Core Slime
Fantasy · Realm_Weaver
A great story please continue.
ch 47 Secret hunt
Cultivation Starts With Selling Talent
Eastern · Cryo_Knight