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Brother, really these chapters are making very boring, different from the initial chapters of your novel. And please take off MC's mask, if the story was cliché before, with this it became just another run-of-the-mill novel. What is the need for the masks? It's simply ridiculous, take that crap off and that's it. And there are several chapters where the MC does nothing, just thinks, when that text can be summarized in a few chapters. The truth is that I loved this novel at the beginning, it deserved 5 stars, but now it's simply falling....

So far, the book is going super well, it's a good novel if you want to spend some time training, just what I was looking for. The pace is very good, a little slow at times, but nothing outrageous... And the author has some His, her, him, etc. errors. But he seems to fix them as the chapters go by Author, don't drop this novel! By the way, when is a +18 scene :3?

I could say that this is a very good novel, sometimes it is a little slow, but it gives us a lot of excitement in the chapters or interesting information, so it is quite interesting. Leaving aside the mistakes of Her, his, him, him, I think it's a very good novel that has great potential, especially the MC who feels quite human. Keep it up author, and don't drop it! By the way... When scene R18 :3?

Simply put, the novel is amazing, and even though I would prefer it to be a little faster, I still love it I could say I like it better than the author's other novel.... Keep up the good work author, don't disappear!

Well, I've caught up and I really liked it, decent writing, the theme of the powers is very interesting and they don't seem too complex to understand. I love the MC, it's cold but at the same time crazy and interesting, the handling of the mystery is also good and the battles are very strategic and raw. I want more! Good book, I hope the next one they explain about Ahilon's world.

GOOOOOOOD, Very good. More more more more