I don't want to be that guy but in the world Information you've specified that 6 beings have skills and gifts including Valun and Kaiser, but here it's stated that there are only 2 and that's Valun and Kaiser, should we take it so that Valun doesn't know about it yet or is it just a data mistake.
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Fantasy · Zeno_Archer
Except for some doubts here and there I think it's pretty interesting, hope you can clear some doubts I have added in the first chapter's comment.
Asendance of the Outcasted Archer
Fantasy · Zeno_Archer