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It was good. I wish the sex scenes were a little more personal.

Good story. The sexy scene wasn't until the last chapter and I was going to see more of the love between Neil and Austin but it was mostly about his uncertainty about leaving his wife. They didn't get a divorce until the last chapter. It was good but not a favorite. The dog helped.

It was ok. It wasn't finished and the time taken to get to the sex scene only to have it cut off was a waste.

This was obviously not finished but it was also obviously at the end so it didn't really matter. Everything was resolved pretty much. It was a good little story. The sex scenes were hot 🔥 🥵

He didn't finish the last two pages on this website so in the comments on the last chapter a fan took a screen shot of the rest. The book was amazing! The sex scenes were smoking hot 🔥 🥵 😍

Lovely 😍 The sex scenes were hot 🔥 as usual with this author. It was really sweet too. 😋 Great job!

Perfect! The sex scenes were hot 🔥 🥵 and it was very sweet! Great job! Very well written!

This is adorable. I got the gist of it early on but it's still good. Great job!

Really great! The sex was hot 🔥 🥵 and the other times were sweet 😋. Great job!

This is what I needed! The sex scenes were hot 🔥 🥵 😍 and the story was so real and adorable! I can't get enough! I needed a story where both mc's parents were supportive. The conflict of Joshua's self esteem issues and the manscaping, or lack there of, is a legitimate issue. People are expected now to have a certain image that sometimes isn't for them. I'm so happy Will was the type of guy who lifted Joshua up and understood him. That's relationship goals! I love this story! 😀 ❤️ 😍 💗

I love it except for the abrupt cut off at the end. More stories about cross dressing need to come out. Thanks for this but I think it needs to be finished.

You have to love ❤️ a story work a dog 🐕 in it! This was great! It was well written worth a sexy scene thrown in. Very nice! Great job!

This was a great story! The sexy scenes were hot 🔥 🥵 😍 and it was adorable! Great job! I would love to hear more about Pablo and Sebs life.

This was a great story. I do feel like the sexy scenes were cut off way too soon but it had a good flow. Great job!

Wonderful!! The sex scenes were 🔥 🥵 hot! It was sweet and adorable. Great job!

It didn't have any sex scenes in it but it was awesome! The sex scenes and feeling them connect would have made a huge difference. Brian was a little shit but the rest of the characters were well written and adorable. Great job!

Perfect! Sexy times with a really sweet ending. Wonderfully written and in just 10 chapters you get two great character development. 👏 👍 ❤️ 🔥 🥵 🥞

A lot of people didn't like this but I got it for half off which was about 100 coins. I got to chapter 7. It's smut. If you like smut with a story to it this book it for you. It's not bad writing. The passion and horny scenes are there. I'll read more later but I would recommend it if you want something to get your motor going. 😉 😜

Was it worth it? YES! Does it need to be completed still? Unfortunately, also yes. 😕 The characters are great. I was to make sure Jackson and Charlie are doing OK. I want to see more of Vince and Ian. I want Ethan to fall in love, maybe have a poly relationship with Ian and Vince. I want Vanessa to burn 🔥. 🔥 Great job author!

This really needs to be edited. One example is edited they meant "Nothing more than that" but said "Nothing much than this". It's bad English through some and others could have flowed better. The characters were cute. I think the communication between characters shouldn't be clumped until one paragraph. It makes it hard for the reader to figure out who said what. The plot wasn't anything special. I've read these types of stories a lot. I wish she would put a unique spin on this kind of plot. For a new writer It's not terrible. I wish the author good luck on her other books, if the author is a she.