I have only one thing to say.... This whole book/story is worth maybe 10-15 chapters total. I see almost everything repeated over and over and over again and it takes away the life of this thing. Now, I'm not saying this is bad cause it's actually good, very good. But I just don't think this was thought out to well and it kind of shows. Anyway I hope this gives you some feedback and criticism for future writing you may do.
ch 48 no more
TV · Table_Qwest
Ouat for sure but I'm waiting on a new chapter. I read everything within 2 hours ughh
ch 38 Chapter 38
TV · ArtoriaPendragon_
Pornographic Content Hate or bullying Release of personal info Violence Spam Other
I have only one thing to say.... This whole book/story is worth maybe 10-15 chapters total. I see almost everything repeated over and over and over again and it takes away the life of this thing. Now, I'm not saying this is bad cause it's actually good, very good. But I just don't think this was thought out to well and it kind of shows. Anyway I hope this gives you some feedback and criticism for future writing you may do.
ch 48 no more
Resurgence of Twilight
TV · Table_Qwest