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This story sure is all over the place, one moment he is a careful person and the next a full on idiot. And this strange interaction with his sister is not weird at all. Not sure where you are trying to go with this.

A 3 year old kid drinking coffe..really now. I get that his mind is mature but his body is not. Does not matter how much some one loved smoking,drinking and coffe in a past life. You would not be able to handel consuming stuff like that as a 3 year old kid no matter how mature and adult like you are.

How very human of them, you sure they are orcs? lol

Who ever started with the killings is clearly idiots, the city is clearly a safe zone and that clearly means there is a exit somewhere. By killing each other they are only making them selves weaker not stronger. If there is dangers in that place they just made it more likely they will all die.

They are taking the hobbits to isengard!

I guess they are all going to die next huh..there is way to much death for my in this story.

Would have made more sense if it had been a crazy cult instead of terrorists, a cult could have had some dumb reason for doing what they did but a terrorist group would never have slowly killed random people like that and instead would have focused on killing allot of people to make a statement.

Eh whats going on? This story is all over the place...

Well it started out okay, but then after he got a master that got control over his brain it all went into clown territory. Then a sudden rebellion out of the blue that listens to him despite not having interacted at all. Its way to quick and dumb. The story no longer make any sense.

Thats so dumb sigh...

Yeah i dont understand what is going on here, that was pretty stupid.

What are you talking about? It super weird, it makes no sense at all. If this had happend to my sister i would have killed it the second it was proven as fact, even more so if the same had happend to me like that.

This got to be the one of the dumbest things i have ever read here so far. I hope there is no more fake drama tossed in here to spike things up for no reason.

Yeah this was weird, you dont just turn into a full on lunatic because you have nothing to do all day.

The next part is broken and missing parts, not worth paying for. You can skip to part two.

Why is this part i paid for broken and missing some parts?

Phew that was a really scary moment. Allot of people died but at least the ones we care about seem to survive.