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Great Finale!

Fantastic action scene. And u also balanced the dialogue between the action scenes perfectly. Sohel and Shadow’s meeting was also Perfectly done. My God! The story is getting so much better. Well done dude, U nailed it again!

Fire Chapter 🔥🔥🔥! Jacob moments were hilarious as well. Love that man. S-tier Character in my eyes.

Dude ur writing skill has seriously improved alot. The last few chapters felt like watching a really good anime.Every part of this chapter was amazing. And Luna stabbing Stone was just 10/10 one of THE BEST moments in the Novel. You really outdid yourself on this chapter. Congrats!👍👍👍

Wow... that was insane. Completely insane but in a good way. Probably the best character backstory so far in the story imo. The Backstory is really Really well done. Nailed the tragedy really well. Massive props 👍👍👍

Really really felt bad for what Luna n the other kids had to go through. The skeletons revealed to be children was very dark and was really well written. This chapter all around was written really well. Another high-tier chapter. Loved it alot 👍.

Great Chapter. The tension of the Entire Scenario was written really well and also really liked how fast paced this chapter was.

This was one of your best chapters so far. The very first part with Luna, Hunt n Stone was done very well n was surprisingly surprisingly Dark. Luna’s mission to kill Sohel got me really hyped. And the part with Jacob wanting to fight was hilarious. And the Arsenal part was Dope. I’m really loving the darker tone the story seems to be getting at. Overall this chapter set up the mission perfectly.

The whole investigation part about Luna was done really really well. And the Orphanage part was also done really well. Great Chapter. 👍

“Where’s Blast?” “He’s sleeping” Absolutely Based, gotta love Jacob.

This is probably the most mad Sohel got in one chapter, man really lost his temper here. This ch got me interested in alot of stuff: the orphanage, shadow. U r building up the story really well . Keep it up 👍.

Agent Flynn and ARIA’S interaction was gold. ARIA all around is a great addition to the team.

Very interested to know who Sohel’s acquaintance is. Good chapter. Made me more excited for this mission.

It’s interesting that the USA is an unsigned nation. This new mission sounds really cool. And Artemis’s introduction was done really well.

All the delta squad members have cool names. Maverick, Eagle, Maddog, Reaper.

Great start for the volume. Sohel Naomi n Jacob’s interaction in the car was great 👍

Nice way to end vol 1 of the story. Also that thing bout Specialists not living for long n losing their mind from ptsd was really Dark.

Another really well written fight scene. Cool Stuff man. 👍👍

Sohel and Naomi rooftop conversation one of the best parts in the novel so far.Also Sohel was really smooth like WOW.

The training scene was written really really well. The whole thing felt awesome to read. Your writing of the chapters have improved alot. Keep it up 👍 👍