The chapters are good but so short, but i shouldn't be greedy, good work author
ch 143 Into action
Video Games 路 loskro
Having duy make nawaki his clone is cruel man 馃槶
ch 110 Chapter 110: Return and Rewards
Anime & Comics 路 Cloe23
I really hope mc gives Orochimaru another direction for his research that would make him not a complete psycho who torture kids lol
ch 109 Chapter 109: The Stains on a Bright Surface Can't Be Hidden
Anime & Comics 路 Cloe23
The Sand manipulation is a derivative from magnet release and is a kekkei genkai so not a technique unlike the shadows of the nara There's no oil in fire release unless it's a Jiraya made combinaison jutsu, which the puppet would not be able to shrug off so easily, also why was he attacking the puppet? Attack hoshi, and if i remember right chakra flow should be able to sever chakra threads, this is why there will never be a kage ninja puppet master, sasori had numbers and they never left his proximity and he was barely S-rank only the numbers were impressive and the fact he could sustain heavy damage with his puppet body
ch 96 Chapter 96: Ample Harvest
Anime & Comics 路 Cloe23
I really don't like Frenzy/bloodthirsty/berserker unless they're in control of it 馃槙
ch 93 Chapter 93: Unleashed Tatsuma!
Anime & Comics 路 Cloe23
That battle feel cheap as hell Seems like the system isn't well thought about either 5k should have been the lower end jonin and 10k the average one, at this rate kage level will be 100k which isn't possible to get unless you train every attribute every day non-stop for 136 years It's 13 years to become a jonin, Kakashi was one at 12? And he didn't start training his first few years Unless having more than jonin talent can make the speed of training progress exponentially it's impossible
ch 92 Chapter 92: Skyrocketing Strength!
Anime & Comics 路 Cloe23
I really hope he doesn't become a berserker like gintoki, it's really unsuitable for ninja
ch 90 Chapter 90: Sore Throat...
Anime & Comics 路 Cloe23
?? That's not how it works? At least not for blade of wind tho vacuum blade was shown in a similar feat What author wanted was probably more like chakra flow, what asuma use
ch 84 Chapter 84: Learning From Orochimaru
Anime & Comics 路 Cloe23
Except for the growth through battle everything else is a last resort kind of things that i hope won't be used much, if i was superstitious i would have refused it since it seems to make his fate a Bad one
ch 80 Chapter 80: Personal Unique Talent
Anime & Comics 路 Cloe23
Oh maybe mc could become a pseudo jinchuriiki like sora or the Twins of kumo
ch 74 Chapter 74: Mito's Gift!
Anime & Comics 路 Cloe23
It's both
ch 72 Chapter 72: Sakumo's Training Notes
Anime & Comics 路 Cloe23
Mc and Minato might as well be brother in all but name
ch 71 Chapter 71: Hidden Effects of Space-Time Talent
Anime & Comics 路 Cloe23
Bahahah best mentor 馃槶
ch 68 Chapter 68: Last Minute Changes Are Never Appreciated
Anime & Comics 路 Cloe23
Wait i'm pretty sure Tsunade gained the mind eye's of kagura but that's an Uzumaki trait no? And she didn't have it in the original story, but can mc have it as a reward? Or is it considered a ninjutsu or a sensory talents?
ch 67 Chapter 67: Jiraiya's Choice
Anime & Comics 路 Cloe23
Isn't the Battlefield of the second War concentrated in rain? It's when the sannin gain their titles, chiyo against Tsunade front is in the third War because of something then Jiraya come with a solution that result in their alliance in the beginning of canon no?
ch 66 Chapter 66: Sparks Between Two Countries
Anime & Comics 路 Cloe23
Is it the Minds eye of kagura that mito used? It looks like it, tho she may have combined the hate-sensor of Kurama with it since she used red chakra to help kushina use it
ch 63 Chapter 63: Kushina's Bias Unveiled
Anime & Comics 路 Cloe23
Nawaki being average or a little better would be normal why make him so useless? He died in an "ambush" from the explosion corps of iwa (i still think danzo was involved) so him being talented wouldn't save him
ch 62 Chapter 62: New Training Schedule
Anime & Comics 路 Cloe23
If the talent being linked to the body was true there would be much more discrimination in school
ch 52 Chapter 52: Tsunade's Doubts
Anime & Comics 路 Cloe23
Is nawaki attracted to explosion? 馃槶
ch 112 Chapter 112: Nawaki's Talent?
Naruto: My Unique System
Anime & Comics 路 Cloe23