Webnovel Author: hamzaskhaan - Novel Collection

I can't promise to improve in a single day, but I would want you to know that I take your comment very seriously, and that I will keep these points in my mind as I write the future chapters, and also improve the existing ones. This is the first version of the story, and I haven't gotten to editing it. I will definitely push further than this. This is not where I plan to take a breadth. Thankyou for your valuable insights, and I hope you the best!!

This is a very good comment and I will take my time to explain it. The character, no, the entire story, is drawing out from reality more than fiction. I have incorporated many things that happen in real life, rather than creating a character who's role is clear from the beginning. For instance, there are people who may be a hero for one group but a villian for the other. My character is a hacker; criminals don't think in binary terms like good or evil, left wing or right wing. They just do what suits them. The MC in this prologue appears to be complex and morally ambiguous, exhibiting traits of both anti-hero and villain archetypes. At first, the MC seems to have a strong sense of morality, however we learn that he wants revenge from humanity which has confused his moral standings, therefore he has the capacity to do good, but is currently an anti-hero. This is a complex situation that many people find themselves in. We are all either evil but lack the skill to do evil, or we are very skilled, but lack the immorality to use it in the way of evil. For those who lie in the shaded area, like the MC, is what I would like to focus at. However, do not be confused, for this event of Tokyo being obliterated, does set the MC on a path to betterment, although slowly.

thanks a lot for the feedback. I will make fixing the paragraphs my priority!

Thanks for the suggestion. I will correct it asap, and search for other potential redundancies.