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Fantasy · Albinus_istamar
Sorry mate, i don't know why is uploaded the old versión of this chapter, on a first try the name of the MC is Ikky, but i had to change it because a real hacker named Ikky wrote me a private message to change it, the i change the name for Lion
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Fantasy · Albinus_istamar
thk you mate
ch 37 A few hours before...
Sci-fi · Albinus_istamar
What do you mean?
"Congratulations on being the first player with 10 cores of level 3 or higher in the tutorial"
Fantasy · Albinus_istamar
Fixed, i don't know why but this things happens in the upload version
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Fantasy · Albinus_istamar
fixed
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Fantasy · Albinus_istamar
sorry mis translation, equipment
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Fantasy · Albinus_istamar
I know that it's not usual on a englishe writing style but on spanish if there are a dialog and the point or the thought has not a real clousure on the phrase we will use "..." , can you see it like a breath
I tried to ask Lion if he knew any important information about the world we were heading to, but he preferred not to say anything until the tournament was over. There was no point in insisting, so when we saw that the Scottish giant was drunk and snoring in bed, Lion and I said goodbye to go to our respective cabins...
Fantasy · Albinus_istamar
hahaha a bad mistranslation, on spanish if we fell on somthing it's that we realized something
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Fantasy · Albinus_istamar
changed
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Fantasy · Albinus_istamar
i thought it's more easy with this change
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Fantasy · Albinus_istamar
jummm i have to take see how to say it in a better way
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Fantasy · Albinus_istamar
thk,
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Fantasy · Albinus_istamar
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Fantasy · Albinus_istamar
I prefer a girl calling me daddy than a boy with his "Hi bro..." ;)
"I... no... it's not what you think... but how was I going to propose to you..." At that moment, I realized that deep down he was still the same insecure daddy as when I met him, and decided to torment him a little...
Fantasy · Albinus_istamar
done
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Fantasy · Albinus_istamar
Better transaltion changed
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Fantasy · Albinus_istamar
People don't like cheaters...
Much of the crowd leaned back, partly sorry for his harassing attitude, although that did not diminish either his hateful looks, his expressions of envy, or his angry, cruel, harsh comments...
Fantasy · Albinus_istamar
Its hard to write two novels at same time, but i'm trying to update to chapter a day on this one, and other two chapters on th other one, i hope i wil return this summer to update three chapters a day
ch 64 The Hecarion system
Eneas Fate
Sci-fi · Albinus_istamar