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would like to see this novel getting better and better ! good luck

After reading 1100 chapter. My main concern was how the heck story was revolving only around the labyrinth (although we do get teleported to different realms in trials). Second, some characters were unnecessary, like Ru Songci, Fairy Lucia, Hua Wenxi( little princess' servant?) Yang Mi(?daughter of an old man, instead You JingJing could have been introduced as his daughter). What was the use of Succubus Queen lol? Many maidens do not contribute to the story. The main thing I don't like is the main heroine Xia JiaJia is still not with him (even though I read in a chapter that the author doesn't like novels where there is separation for 1000 chapters), and I feel like they will meet at the end of the novel and that's the end. (ironic isn't it? Main FMC got less screen time than many side characters). I hate this kind of setting. Well, this story still has potential. I would like to see a little bit of drama also. There are still many possibilities -like other world invasion, mc goes to other world, his heroines come later, some get trapped, some become super strong and build a sect which comes as a surprise, scheming trops, Mc has honourable enemy who hates him, and uses despicable methods, but is honourable in fight, mc loses his son/maidens to some powerful enemy/world, so he goes to save them etc. conclusion - a bit above average till now.

we r already at the centre of the universe "goddess star place"? and it's just only about 700 chapters, usually we come to this kind of big place at the near end of novel...seems like this novel might not be big. Please have at least minimum 10000 chapters (T_T)..

Yeah, I quite liked the Ecstasy Land Arc, that was good. I like Mo Bei and Old Man, these characters sound funny and his relation with the old man is what I like the most.It is indeed getting better. I do hope that he gets a bit intelligent for the sake of character development.One more thing to ask- u got hired at Google or not lol😂

I kind of understand what u are saying, but we should bang heads because of an interesting story, characters where each of the characters have some significant value and backstory (hard to achieve, I know) and plotline, not because of grammar or words chosen to write novels.

okay thanks, he's getting a bit better now that I am reading chapter 580 and onwards. At least he is not a full idiot now. But it still feels weird to read word like "mother consort", who will even call their own mother as "mother consort", they will either use some kind of nickname or just say something like "respected mother" or just "mother". It just feels a bit weird to me.

author, please make him a bit clever for a bit of realism please. He acts completely most of the time and somehow is a genius. He needs to be a bit more clever and a little bit serious as time grows otherwise where is the character development? You don't want him to make the same mistakes every time right? If it's all comedy and he doesn't develop, we can already guess what is going to happen next. Make him a bit more serious and clever (like Fang Zhangfei, but little less, because she is shown as too cunning).

I like this, but the main character seems like "oddly stupid" many times ( all the times I guess). He needs more character development, at least he needs to be more clever, thoughtful and a bit intelligent. I have read till 215 chapters and he still acts more of a stupid than clever, he doesn't comprehend anything, he didn't get a higher level of understanding in his technique by some inspiration or anything etc.. The use of the word "consort" is too much, U can decrease it author. Instead of "Mother consort", u can just say "mother" I guess. And "protege", What does this mean? core disciple? disciple? successor? maybe u can use more simple word instead of protege.