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was so sick of fanfics where it's always fighting. like it that he is changing konoha not repeating hiruzens mistake. it would be even more good if he develops konoha technology. author san don't drop it.[img=Loving it]

I don't understand bro hiruzen is biased towrd clans despite knowing mc is senju he wants him under danzo in 1 ch he wants him under danzo in other he wants him dead. mc killed jiraya coz he is obstacle in his way to become hokage shit story. shit plot. I hate the fact I wasted my reading this shit

I don't like mc. What is wrong with him he killed momnuske just because he was weak and wrong choice for shogunate. but he forgot he is just 8 year old kid without giving him a chance to grow . he acts like the world revolves around him🙄

it was good until author added norse mythology shit. and all the Abrahamic religions are lokis prank on humans. if it would remain pure historical than it would have been awesome like 100/10

what th f is good author literary raped the timeline.