💀 his first thought was putting his fingers in the baby's mouth?
But what could he do? His only possible interactions were with the baby, and he doubted that putting his finger in his mouth would do anything to help him with his plight.
Fantasy · Adamus_Auguste
bad exposition it's too confusing
In the cruel silence of the scalding dry heat in the middle of Africa, near the borders of the West. The ground was covered in cracks from the lack of moisture that would have been a blessing from the skies.
Fantasy · Ivivion
Also, what's a writing system?
it's more of a rhetorical thought of "wow the emperor gets information fast. makes sense considering this is the imperial palace. "
'Just how fast does word travel?' Cassius wondered. 'We came here as soon as the awakening ceremony ended.'
Fantasy · Rerian
because it just doesn't
PS: Pasta doesn't exist in this world.
Fantasy · Rerian
what rule like that?
ch 13 Fake system
Fantasy · Rerian
my mom said the same thing except I always kept refusing to donate my dolls and one day I woke up with my dolls gone 😭 eventually I came to the same conclusion as wonhee. (kinda. I still wanted my dolls though.)
"When I was a child, it was hard for me to let go of the dolls that my parents wanted me to donate to the less fortunate kids. Every time I acted up like a spoiled brat, my parents would remind me that I shouldn't be greedy– that I should be generous because it's the only way I could show my gratitude for being born lucky," Wonhee said, reminiscing about her childhood. "Once I understood that it was better for the dolls to be donated so other children could play with them than keep them hidden in my playroom, I let them go completely."
Urban · sola_cola
he's called ruda cuz he's rude
Ruda, who clearly got Wonhee's message, suddenly looked cold.
Urban · sola_cola
are they the only natural S-ranks in the world or just Korea?
"Ahyeonnie, the Big 4 are the only naturally awakened S-Class Hunters RECORDED," Yool said, emphasizing the word 'recorded.' "Who's to say that there aren't other natural S-Class Hunters out there who are hiding their real class by using a skill?"
Urban · sola_cola
interesting chap. I think some of the paragraphs could be split up for easier reading
ch 0 1 The beginning after the end-1st
Fantasy · _Great_Love_
the transition is too sudden. tell them that the place changed
"It's finally here." The man with a sword said it in an echoing voice.
Fantasy · _Great_Love_
I think you should make character profiles for them on WN. Just go to inkstone on laptop and next to the create chapter button you will see a create character button you can click it and add wonhee and yejun. some of the photos on your ko-fi are so cute they would be perfect for them.
Wonhee suddenly got the chills. "The villain smells like camellia flowers…?"
Urban · sola_cola
alr
Wonhee suddenly got the chills. "The villain smells like camellia flowers…?"
Urban · sola_cola
yea I have. I got contracted last last week :) and the power level for mages and swordsmen that have systems is the same generally speaking. honestly I think I need to find a way to explain the whole system and systemless hunters thing better and what types of systems are there (it's not one system, but multiple systems) F-rank to S-rank are the power levels.
ch 0 -2 Power system
Fantasy · Rerian
he went to get the milk. literally.
The moment she showed signs of being pregnant, the man abandoned her, saying that he was going to buy milk. It was the last time she saw him and why she raised her son alone.
I Refused To Be Reincarnated
Fantasy · Adamus_Auguste