Young_Master_0069

Well the story is good. 5/5 I would like to recommend you to add supernatural or any magical realism stuff because without it they have a limited life span and you can't expect a happy ending because some of his lovers are older than him and will naturally die before him .

The Illicit Affair: Breaking All the Rules

Fantasy · Evil_Beast

Young_Master_0069

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No bro, please don't change it

She smiled contentedly before answering, "Thank you, my love. You were fantastic, too. You made me feel so good. No man has ever pleased me so much."

The Illicit Affair: Breaking All the Rules

Fantasy · Evil_Beast

Young_Master_0069

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What's her body count ?

She smiled contentedly before answering, "Thank you, my love. You were fantastic, too. You made me feel so good. No man has ever pleased me so much."

The Illicit Affair: Breaking All the Rules

Fantasy · Evil_Beast

Young_Master_0069

23d

Commented

Thank you for the chapter

ch 42 Conversation after a long time

The Winner Of Life

Anime & Comics · Slime_king

Young_Master_0069

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Commented

Honestly speaking the story has lots of potential. But the chapters are a bit short. Well overall it's 10/10

ch 15 Chapter 13. Academy's Entrance Exam...[4]

Villain : Conquest

Urban · Lone_Raut_

Young_Master_0069

25d

Commented

Glad to see you back again. Thank you for the chapter [img=recommend]

ch 40 Divine tricks

The Winner Of Life

Anime & Comics · Slime_king

Young_Master_0069

29d

Posted

Hello author. I love your books but can you make a update shedule . You haven't updated both your novel The winner of life and Avatar system for a month. Hope you update soon.