your writing quality is good ,but we gotta have more chapter to decide ,the plot is good ,I would like to see where the story takes on from here .my constructive criticm would be too load more chapters ,and make bigger chapter , I would also like to see more words .except this good work author
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your writing quality is good ,but we gotta have more chapter to decide ,the plot is good ,I would like to see where the story takes on from here .my constructive criticm would be too load more chapters ,and make bigger chapter , I would also like to see more words .except this good work author
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