This story has amazing potential. The writing is pretty good, and while they could be a little more descriptive with character design, the story and background are great! It manages comedy and tragety, and having just enough information without overloading you! I’m giving this a 3 in release schedule since it just dropped, but I’ll make sure to be updated on the story of Michael!
Fantasy · swag_lord
This has a lot of potential! Just keep writing, and I’m sure this will be cool!
ch 0 2 Judgement: Arc 1, Chapter 2 - Genesis
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This story has amazing potential. The writing is pretty good, and while they could be a little more descriptive with character design, the story and background are great! It manages comedy and tragety, and having just enough information without overloading you! I’m giving this a 3 in release schedule since it just dropped, but I’ll make sure to be updated on the story of Michael!
Judgement: In Heaven, as on Earth.
Fantasy · swag_lord