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Mc could have perfectly used this opportunity to make ema agree to many of his demands that way he would have taken control. As a man he need to take lead and need thorough grip over his girl and surrounding situations , only then his true character development can take place.

Nice ch. hope mc starts taming his gf now and take control of her properly. A yandere is dangerous but an obedient yandere is overpowered.

That way things will become too predictable as such things have happened in many urban romance books before.

Hello author my English not that good but I will try to tell what I feel. I agree with above points said by 2-3 people but what I want to say is you seem to be putting/ introducing many misunderstandings or mysteries in a short period of time like regarding mc girlfriend , mc family, mc Friends, mc livelihood, mc interactions etc which might be appearing as a good form of character development from your side but to readers appearing as a frustrating, long teasing plot reads just like those high school Japanese books where plot is full of unforeseen situations and helplessnessness which I kinda stopped reading some time back. It’s better to take and complete or clear one thing or one situation at a time.

I hope it is not a Netorare book if so, it should had been mentioned in the starting itself, by tragedy tag I thought like someone closer to Mc died but cheating in relationships is a big no, I am not a fan of it and would not be able to read further if mc girlfriend cheated on him, I hope there is a situation where ema is forced or there is an another reason behind her talking to another boy because I can feel it she already loves mc a lot but if there is cheating or netorare then I will drop out, just a head up a lot of readers here hate it when our mc is cheated especially by his long term girlfriend, and it may be negative for book. Also the grammar and sentences are good.