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If I’m being honest the series was honestly beautiful at first the grammar invoked a lot of emotion but after 15 ch the whole world building the system and progress becomes horrible the system gives them skills without backlash or event restraints the way his siblings fought and the way it happened was so horrible it takes the whole point of being from another world away what’s the point if he doesn’t have an edge over everyone also the timeline is rather annoying the system is just appearing so you can just tell that there will be a whole lot of pointless politics in this series also with the way the system gives them the ability to choose their own abilities everyone would have abilities added with the fact that they have complete mastery of their skill there will be no need for an academy also there will be instability due to everyone having their preferred abilities with complete mastery the mc’s family is also participating in the fight and their all unlikable ones a pussy ones a horrible person who bullies his friends and family and ones a 304 all in all with all the elements introduced in the series including the fact aliens gave them the system and the fact he was summoned to save the world by a diety or so with all the undertones and elements I see this series failing badly it’s Already failing honestly dropped

Haven’t read it bro but 270 ch and not a female in sight this dudes gay bro they don’t have to be a romantic interest or anything but none really

It does get pretty good but What do you mean more human you literally started making h more zombie even though his skill says it’s just a subrace which is less than half or should be in control now your giving him an existential crisis that makes no sense which is why I dropped it in 136 im honestly pissed cause I paid for this shit

Series was good but instead of giving the Mc a useful ability he kept giving him bullshit abilities and now he is extremely lagging behind in terms of combat power against almost everyone in his group and the abilities were not useful also the author put his ability as subrace so he should be half zombie not full zombie like the author is trying to make him by giving him existential crisis and he’s still giving him bs abilities at least give him something good to ease us or something also he’s becoming less Human which makes no sense because sub race should be less than human or at most half and at some point the ability should have become an active ability at some point if you ask me 1-136 dropped

Also I’m honestly doubting this guys age you say he’s 23 but he acts 10 from the moment the series starts and he still hasn’t matured

It’s good overall but the series is way too slow paced I can’t pay for 100 ch and barely anything has happened nor are there any signs of going to the academy but the biggest flaw is that there isn’t a proper division between ranks you haven’t mentioned if it would take 5 rank 1’s to beat a rank 2 or vice versa so I don’t feel the acomplishment when he kills a higher rank honestly it doesn’t have much impact without proper context from ch 1-120

It says harem but none of the female characters have that much depth in general talk less about liking him they barely have personality nor do they have personal interactions with mc so please work on that but everything else isn’t so bad and again start on the harem as soon as you see this not just that the girls barely have personalities except Elaine so please work on that

Good story and has mad potential but tell me why his problems make no sense bro let the only important person in his life die because he didn’t want to use his skills on anyone else which makes no sense the fact his personality took a 180 for no reason the author could have answered this question a number of ways but left it unattended which makes most his actions unreasonable because there is no cause behind it, it became a mess cause his personality is all over the place and so are his actions im in ch76 and it doesn’t look like the author is going to solve it soon….or ever so I might drop it soon

Author can you stop making Rey look so useless and pathetic in front of his classmates it’s really annoying like REALLY REALLY annoying I’ve wanted to drop or take a break so many times because of it