Camille_Corpin - Profile

HAHAHHAHAHAA I CAN'T STOP LAUGHING HAHHAHAHAHA I IMAGINED THE FACE OF CROCODILE AHAHAHAHHAHAHA

I think it is on their prime not their peak, and Might guy's body constitution didn't improve at the battle vs Madara, he just release his the full strength of the eight gates to battle him...

Great start though, just fix the minor mistakes and don't be discouraged at criticism😉

He/Him and She/Her

Also the use of pronouns, he and him, he is used for if a person did things himself or to describe him like "he did not wash the dishes", "He doesn't know how to swim" and him is used if someone is describing thing will be done or did to him "Inspected him", "kick him", "kill him"

And don't use capital case if it is not the name of a person and place, like Casterly Rock and Aegon for example, if it is just a profession use small case and only use capital case on start of a paragraph or after a dot.

Dockter

That's only for you, it is epic. It shows their unity, an army of united 100 men is more dangerous than a random collection of 1,000 men, like a rock demolishing a sand castle...