B6_12nn3 - Profile

Yo how have you been doing haven't seen you for a long time now

Honestly this fic is very underwhelming. While the grammar is decent the quality of writing itself is pretty mediocre. The interactions between people and the dialogues are very bland and uninteresting, the man hating goddess having a crush on him after a short interaction its just a classic case of making other characters dumb to make the mc look good. His training arc is the most disappointing thing ever i feel like you gave absolutely no thoughts into it" he was fighting a tiger and their fists collided" really? Then few months later he was training against tiger,bear and an eagle AN EAGLE seriously?He is influenced by sukuna and has violent nature yet he feels attraction towards women? This is literally just an edgy mc. The whole fic altogether is extremely fast paced.

It is looking pretty good at least the first 7 ch that have been uploaded dunno about the future. I like that the mc is not some edgy kid like in most of the fics on this site ,grammar is also pretty decent the only problem I found was that his only motivation to do anything is through his system.

Since when did liking your own comment equaled fragile ego? So you got so butthurt from a negative review that you tried to search up dirt on me lmao this is what is called a fragile ego. Honestly I am unable to see which of my comments have been deleted so I don't know what you are talking about since this is the only web novel account i have you can make any assumption you want to not like my words will change your mind. And about the "R",you didn't mention it in words sure but your mc is tecnically a grown ass man and he mentioned how he "tore through her hymen" when she tried to seduce/tease him when they were in middle school he is not just a "R" pist but also a "pdf file".

The Mc is a retard in chapter 3 he mentioned he doesn't have any moral compass and all of a sudden he has morals to not brawl with kids. The only time he losses moral compass is when raping underaged kids

Incredible I have never seen a more dogshit fanfic ever before. This is my first time giving someone 1 star there is so much wrong with this fic that if I were to point it out the word count alone would exceed the word count of this fic.

A fanfic author you can find his work on fanfiction.net he has barely written 2-3 dxd fic people treat it like some masterpiece despite it being dogshit

What more were you expecting? A 12 dimensional being wouldn't even bother or be intrested in a lower dimensional world to begin with. Gotta make a story somehow even if it was as expected kinda disappointing.

Well where should I start. The story was sort of meh the interaction between everyone were too fast paced and bland. The mc quickly became a gary stu somehow gaining political,social and financial power that should not even be possible to achive within 2 years even if he has supernatural powers. While I appreciate that it is not one of those fics where the GC has no other male other than the mc I would have appreciated if most of the GC members were a bit more recognisable people I don't know the Chinese guys at all. This fic sort of feels like the dollar store version of that one akikan fic(the one with the GC).

Damn I was about to discard reading it thinking this might be one those mass produced fics. Now knowing your views match mine and the fic is more about bros not hoes i will give it a try.

It would be greatly appreciated if author of such fics will get to the point instantly instead of including a whole cliche chapter about a supposed omnipotent god who can casually grant you power to become outer versal making mistakes of not knowing how the mc's soul got lost and then even bothering to apologize by granting mc the power to destroy timeline of a whole universe and multiple souls. This story is as cliche as it can get.

I hated the rwby arc other than that it was pretty good with not so bland interaction

I didn't really expect much from the cringe/edgy sypnosis and gojo pic with only few reviews(most of them being 5 stars maybe because author deleted bad ones). Can you give me a short summary on what this fic is even about?

His reasoning were just speculations not something that is canon in dxd the reason supernatural hides from human is because faith from humans provides extra power to gods and and dream energy that great red feeds on. They are not hiding from humans because they are scared of human potential because the strongest humans,human magicians, government heads and many random humans already know of them and work with them. Humans in dxd absolutely don't pose any threat to them and canonically humans were so weak and at odds against the supernatural that God has to create sacred gears for them to be valid in the game.

If it was a normal interaction it wouldn't have been a problem but it was pretty much forced where baraquiel tried to outright kill the fucking 4 year old mc because he got too close to his daughter and after beating the absolute crap out of the mc he decided to take him as his student on his own.