Review after reading 402 chapters. Writing: -1 for some dialog problems and small mistakes. story: +1 for the earlier chapters. however author makes bad decisions when story progression is already good enough. For example, jumping one problem to another, before solving already interesting mystery. Morever, author makes mc like a pawn without knowing anything and doing whatever he is told. Character: +2 for the Mc's family interactions and the eagerness of learning and developing himself. However there is three major problem. Firstly, his human side does add so little to anything and became the problem instead. Secondly, like I saif before, he doesn't have control over his life, he became pawn without knowing what and why he is doing and no one explain to him. Lastly, Dragons considered wise in the story but they don't teach almost anything to their youngsters without logical reasons, because of that MC has almost died more than once, and they consider that MC's fault. Update: :) World: -1 for some logical problems about magic system and some small inconsistency otherwise it was quite good. Actually the world building that hook me in to this story, and because of that I didn't drop it until know.
Fantasy · Immortal_Simo
Pornographic Content Hate or bullying Release of personal info Violence Spam Other
Webnovel
Review after reading 402 chapters. Writing: -1 for some dialog problems and small mistakes. story: +1 for the earlier chapters. however author makes bad decisions when story progression is already good enough. For example, jumping one problem to another, before solving already interesting mystery. Morever, author makes mc like a pawn without knowing anything and doing whatever he is told. Character: +2 for the Mc's family interactions and the eagerness of learning and developing himself. However there is three major problem. Firstly, his human side does add so little to anything and became the problem instead. Secondly, like I saif before, he doesn't have control over his life, he became pawn without knowing what and why he is doing and no one explain to him. Lastly, Dragons considered wise in the story but they don't teach almost anything to their youngsters without logical reasons, because of that MC has almost died more than once, and they consider that MC's fault. Update: :) World: -1 for some logical problems about magic system and some small inconsistency otherwise it was quite good. Actually the world building that hook me in to this story, and because of that I didn't drop it until know.
Reborn as a DRAGON
Fantasy · Immortal_Simo