jesse_filion

I could not get into novel, it did not flow. wayyyy to many descriptions in a row

I loved tHe whole fic . the only downside is thE FasT pace near the end, could have been a slice of life bit. anyway, Thanks for the read

You nailed the beginning, can’t wait to read the middle. Keep going ‼️

I enjoyed the read. It was a solid cross world novel, but I couldn’t help but feel like the mechanics of the reward system was not right, I dunno

You have to stop adding every decent f&f female, it’s getting ridiculous. It’s happening every 3-4 chapters cmon

I enjoyed reading this novel, thank you. this is tHe second of yours i have read, well Done

Allmost every Sentence is the same, taling about the hum of machines

It was just starting to get good, then bam. Story dropped?

Totally love the fIc, you really need to finish it