TheMoonisPretty

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"HAHAHAHAHHA."

The tale of a Demon

Fantasy · DARKZENO

TheMoonisPretty

1mth

Commented

A red arrow appeared on one side, pointing straight ahead.

The tale of a Demon

Fantasy · DARKZENO

TheMoonisPretty

1mth

Commented

and come frome the abyss!...Fuga"

The tale of a Demon

Fantasy · DARKZENO

TheMoonisPretty

1mth

Posted

So far I'm giving it 4 stars. It has potential but it's still in its infancy and still needs to mature further. Even if the writing isn't the best, it's not incomprehensible but it doesn't make for very fluid reading.

The tale of a Demon

Fantasy · DARKZENO

TheMoonisPretty

2mth

Posted

It's not bad, a good new discovery. However, the author should apply himself a little more to the quality of the work. I like the world and the characters are stylish.

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