Moments 4
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Commented WOOOOH, best chapter so far.
ch 11 Into the Unknown
The Timeless Seven
Urban · Rachit_
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Commented I don't like this style.
ch 0 6 The Mist and the Mystery
The Timeless Seven
Urban · Rachit_
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Commented Don't enter into strange Caves!
As they walked through the forest, Dev noticed a cave entrance. "Look over there," he said, pointing to the cave. "This can be a good place to rest for a while."
The Timeless Seven
Urban · Rachit_
Decent work, try to improve your writing, Firstly I thought its about school romance but later the story shifted completely. I read all chapters, and they're worth it.
The Timeless Seven
Urban · Rachit_