ch 55 • Claws, Chaos And Linne's Lamentable Lack Of Powers
Fantasy · Forteller
no update today?
ch 53 • Three Kids And A Dark Cave
Fantasy · Forteller
weirdo
And about Cerene, who was she kidding? Spheris could see that she was angry, yes. But at the same time, he could see in the very same eyes a glint of hope that Spheris would say yes to Linne's offer.
Fantasy · Forteller
Your action scenes are well written, though you fail to incorporate some other things that are going on around the characters. not a complaint, just a suggestion
The impact was brutal, sending waves of pain reverberating through his body as he crashed onto the unforgiving rocky ground below. His vision swam, and ugh... stars? Stars danced in his vision, their twinkling lights adding to the disorientation. He couldn't believe it—stars, actual stars, were swirling before his eyes, and it wasn't just some metaphorical expression.
Fantasy · Forteller
Just like before 😂
The Gorgolith before him darkened her eyes and a puff of steam blew out of her nose like a warning. Spheris recognised what that meant; she was ready to attack.
Fantasy · Forteller
let me guess, Spider Sense but with shadows
[Influence Unlocked - Umbric Intuition]
Fantasy · Forteller
loved the chapter
ch 36 • The Onslaught Of Grimms
Fantasy · Forteller
probably because he is
"Ugh," he groaned as his head ached harder. Why did it feel like he was forgetting something? Something important?
Fantasy · Forteller
cabbages 🤣🤣🤣??
"It is a term of endearment we use for our friends," Lumian explained with innocent sincerity. "Everyone in the Dariège region is aware of it. It has been a tradition for centuries, believe me, my cabbages."
Fantasy · Cuttlefish That Loves Diving
Tell em! But Spheris is innocent though
"You five are fools. You have the chance to save your realm and bring peace finally to our world, and you spend your time in petty arguments. Follow me to your rooms, you clodpoles! No one comes out until I say so."
Fantasy · Forteller
This makes Nephta even all the more interesting.
"Now I don't think I need to explain what an Avatar is to you. You are all Avatars, embodiments of a Celestial's Essence. Incarnates on the other hand are descendants of the First People, the early men who roamed the land and were granted powers by the Old Gods. After the Old Gods were killed by the Celestials, giving powers to the people on the land was no longer done and the First People eventually died. Their descendants, however, began to develop different kinds of powers and they were called Incarnates.
Fantasy · Forteller
hey there, Marcez! Gotta pitch my novel... The Raven Thief. Fantasy. Give it a try :-)?
Max-Level Learning Ability: Facing The Cliff And Repenting For 80 Years
Eastern · Girl In Short Skirt