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ch 76 • The Three Mountains

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ch 55 • Claws, Chaos And Linne's Lamentable Lack Of Powers

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no update today?

ch 53 • Three Kids And A Dark Cave

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The Raven Thief

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weirdo

And about Cerene, who was she kidding? Spheris could see that she was angry, yes. But at the same time, he could see in the very same eyes a glint of hope that Spheris would say yes to Linne's offer.

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first here!

ch 49 • Winds Of Contemplation

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Loved it

ch 37 • A Path Through The Darkness

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Your action scenes are well written, though you fail to incorporate some other things that are going on around the characters. not a complaint, just a suggestion

The impact was brutal, sending waves of pain reverberating through his body as he crashed onto the unforgiving rocky ground below. His vision swam, and ugh... stars? Stars danced in his vision, their twinkling lights adding to the disorientation. He couldn't believe it—stars, actual stars, were swirling before his eyes, and it wasn't just some metaphorical expression.

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Just like before 😂

The Gorgolith before him darkened her eyes and a puff of steam blew out of her nose like a warning. Spheris recognised what that meant; she was ready to attack. 

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loved the chapter

ch 36 • The Onslaught Of Grimms

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probably because he is

"Ugh," he groaned as his head ached harder. Why did it feel like he was forgetting something? Something important?

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cabbages 🤣🤣🤣??

"It is a term of endearment we use for our friends," Lumian explained with innocent sincerity. "Everyone in the Dariège region is aware of it. It has been a tradition for centuries, believe me, my cabbages."

Lord of Mysteries 2: Circle of Inevitability

Lord of Mysteries 2: Circle of Inevitability

Fantasy · Cuttlefish That Loves Diving

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Tell em! But Spheris is innocent though

"You five are fools. You have the chance to save your realm and bring peace finally to our world, and you spend your time in petty arguments. Follow me to your rooms, you clodpoles! No one comes out until I say so."

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This makes Nephta even all the more interesting.

"Now I don't think I need to explain what an Avatar is to you. You are all Avatars, embodiments of a Celestial's Essence. Incarnates on the other hand are descendants of the First People, the early men who roamed the land and were granted powers by the Old Gods. After the Old Gods were killed by the Celestials, giving powers to the people on the land was no longer done and the First People eventually died. Their descendants, however, began to develop different kinds of powers and they were called Incarnates.

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