[ Description : The Kaleid Blood or Kaleid Bloodline is an artificial bloodline created by the three primogenitors as the strongest God-Killing weapon. But it proved to be so powerful that they could not control it, and it eventually turned on them. In the end, they divided the bloodline into twelve parts between twelve vampires that would represent the twelve Beast Vassals. ]
Anime & Comics · Akasaki_Ryujin
Ok one last thing on the Rias situation. Rias genuinely loves her family, and no matter how talented one of them is, she would not act like this. Just think of that brat Millicas. Of course you can use the excuse of age being a factor in how she's acting, but that part of Rias that cares for her family has been the most consistent part of her character. You as an author can definitely write the characters how you want to, but man is this a disservice to the original Rias. I won't comment on the dxd arc anymore, because I already know it's just gonna be constant negativity from me, and I don't really want to put you through that lol.
"Our previous names are Arata Sitri and Maya Gremory," this time Maya answered, her gaze drifting to Rias, whose face became increasingly ugly when looking at Maya.
Anime & Comics · Akasaki_Ryujin
Really? Bro hasn't even unlocked all of his power and we are already getting hit with a nerf???? Sigh, I'm really sorry for all of my complaints, especially since I'm binge reading, but man you are hitting me with punch after punch. First we are making Rias not be Rias, and Riser not be Riser, now the nerfs? My hair is turning white because of this...
ch 66 Chapter 66 : The System Returns to Work
Anime & Comics · Akasaki_Ryujin
She does kind of depend on her family though. Do you honestly think that if she didn't have Serafall as a sister that she would be allowed to have her condition for marriage? People often overlook that and just compare her and Rias lol.
Unlike Rias, who depends on Sirzechs for everything and allows him to pamper her, Souna liked to use her mind and do her best before asking for help, and did not allow herself to depend on Searfall's pampering of her.
Anime & Comics · Akasaki_Ryujin
Finally!!!!! Now we can move on and the MC can hopefully experience some character development. Would also like to see ANY development on the harem aspect of this fanfic, because right now there is 0.
ch 45 Chapter 45 : Great Soul Ritual lll
Anime & Comics · Akasaki_Ryujin
Bro this MC is terrible, willing to sacrifice people he has spent actual time with for someone he has no memories of, and now this? Bro needs a ton of character development, if not a whole character reset, just to be somewhat likeable. It's only been 20 chapters, but this whole "revive someone I don't even really know at all costs" situation is just tiring. This would've landed better if you actually reincarnated him and not did the whole memory thing.
While Arata could have created a quest and offered a reward for the revival of Maya, he chose not to do so out of pride.
Anime & Comics · Akasaki_Ryujin
True, but it is up to the author to make the drama and issues seem realistic, and not just because the MC loses his brain for brief moments. Problems that are caused by the antagonist outsmarting or outmaneuvering the MC are good, problems that occur because the MC is just too dumb are annoying to read. tl;dr = Forced drama is annoying and boring to read. (This isn't a shot at this story, just your comment)
Arata had not concealed Maya's existence from Guren. Therefore, Guren was aware of the circumstances and had attempted to locate Maya's body in order to leverage it as a means to secure Arata's unwavering assistance. However, despite his extensive search, Maya's body remained elusive.
Anime & Comics · Akasaki_Ryujin
I see Hori sans face light up as if suddenly she remembered something. She smiled and said "Zura". Zura, a shortening of my name, which didn't mean anything in particular, I did not understand, what she meant. "Hori san, Its not Zura its Katsura" I try to correct her. "I know, but I like Zura better. I think from now I am going to call you that" she giggles. I liked her laugh. This was the first time I saw her laugh like that. Sweet and innocent. "Well, if you are all set on that idea, I humbly accept the name" I smile.
Anime & Comics · Harrytyphoon
Original got shadow banned
ch 0 6 Chapter 6
Smallville I am Clark Kent
TV · daniel_vera