Appeared on the treadmill screen [5 minutes, 3 km]
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Is it that bad?
ch 0 2 The beginning
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I'm open to constructive criticism from anyone, so thank you for your feedback. It helps me improve.
ch 0 1 01-Living in Shadows
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Do you see me as a lawyer or judge or something? Anyway, it's just a fictional story, and it won't focus on the real world at all, so I wanted to make a dramatic story just for fun. Open your mind, man, it's just a fanfic novel. I don't know anything about courts and law, I just like Suits
ch 0 1 01-Living in Shadows
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I fixed it. Thanks for telling me, brother
ch 0 1 07-Conversation
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I know, but these mistakes will lead to character development
I added 4 points to strength, 5 to agility, and 1 to endurance. I think it's a good balance.
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31miles
ch 0 6 The Dream
Ronaldinho in Blue Lock
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