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Got no words for this chapter. It was just Gold 🤍

You earned your laurels. Not often I'm this engrossed in a novel. Will be anticipating to see how far your talent takes you 🤍

Darn, that cliffhanger! Can you perhaps gift me your brain? I promise to return it 🤥

All that good meat going to waste. They should slow down, start up some fire and have 'emselves a nice barbeque

If it were me, think I'd have written something along the lines of: "He kicked a skull thinking it was a stone..." But the way you worded yours is something to learn from. It added more weight to the overall suspense not forgetting the cliffhanger that followed 🤍

So you ain't only bout the action huh? Talk bout bond building *grabs tissues*

This was deep 🤍

Spheris growing ever darker (｡♡‿♡｡)🤍

Could feel her irritation 😂

Told myself I was only gonna read 5 chapters today but you just had to! This ain't fair ಥ‿ಥ💔

And the: "They only appear at night...rarest creatures in the abyss" went out the window lmeo

"You are aware you do not have to eat it right? "

Talon in love? 🥺

From being scared to making an epic beast beg for mercy 🤍

You pluck these creatures outta your nightmares? cause darn ⊙﹏⊙

Man, you surely built this world. Got no words to explain how much gripping it is anymore.

I want Obsidian inside of me. Wait...no, uhm, I meant like inside of my head or wherever.

A survivor through and through

This worthless heathian sure got me captivated. His thought process a philosophical maze almost everyone can relate to 🤍

Each character keep having an authentic voice. I believe I earlier read how terrains in the abyss shapeshift so that actually made this scene weave into the earlier breadcrumbs you provided but then again, could've been a dream but I suppose I'll find that out in the next chapter 🤍