don't know if bro realizes that he just got friend zoned, or he doesn't care 😭
ch 59 • Good Friends
Fantasy · Forteller
hmmmmmmmmmmmm.... some good character representation here... hmmmmmmmmm
ch 58 • A Discordant Combination
Fantasy · Forteller
maybe cut some paragraphs? Great first chapter anyhow.
ch 0 1 Chapter 1: Emory Carson
Fantasy · Bodhi_sattva
Its surface was roiling with red boiling heat. The magma was a little more circumfluent, but it was still way more dense than the river of water. And Spheris knew that if he jumped and the wind decided to toy with his lightless body a little bit, he could fall straight into that lake of magma and die like a cooked meal.
Fantasy · Forteller
bet it tastes like lobster
"No insects for today, Talon." he said to the bird who had already started to scavenge the rocks. "We shall feast on a Queen Scorpion."
Fantasy · Forteller
Literally how math teachers are like
Parable speakers, pfft. Spheris despised them. How easy it would have been for him if those crones had just given him a simple and straightforward direction of where to go or what to do. Instead, he was struggling with the meaning of the sentence.
Fantasy · Forteller
i keep seeing those three witches from that Disney movie in my head
Drawing closer, Spheris could see three figures huddled around the flames. Strange figures they were — petite and hunched, with gnarled frameworks covered by darkish blue garments blending into the darkness around them.
Fantasy · Forteller
Thought-provoking chapter.
ch 40 • A Cave That Forgets
Fantasy · Forteller
this Nero has made me laugh thrice in a row now😂😂😂😂😂😂😂
"Dude, that's like the worst name ever." Nero interjected, causing Yograg to eye him disdainfully.
Fantasy · Forteller
Nero frowned. "Not cool... whichever one of you it was."
Fantasy · Forteller
nocturnal perception means he can see in the dark, yup ? just guessing here 🤷🏼
A 100ip?! He had grown quite a lot for one night. With a weak smile on his face, Spheris sunk his glyph into a safe pocket as to his surprise, a heavy sleep appeared out of nowhere and took him by force.
Fantasy · Forteller
true
Spheris didn't agree with this. To him, fear was important if one was trying to survive. It meant knowing the danger of something and accepting it. Courage meant facing that danger anyway.
Fantasy · Forteller
Where is he always disappearing to?
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Fantasy · Forteller
NVM me, an emotional chapter. Loved it
ch 59 • Good Friends
The Raven Thief
Fantasy · Forteller