LordofCashew222 - Profile

Great story from a great author. I had a friend introduce me to his other novel the vampire system and I thoroughly enjoyed it. This feels a lot more well rounded and you can see that the author his improved a lot. Quality-Above average Language-Diverse Plot-Amazing Character development-I wish the mc was stronger but i guess that will come in the later chapters.

I read around 30 chapters and this is by far one of the best novels on the site. There are little to no mistakes at all, the use of language is really impressive but the plot could do with a few things ironing out in my opinion. Quality-Fantastic Language-Great Plot-Interesting Character development-Seems to be progressing well.

I thought from all the reviews that this would be promising. I was wrong. The idea sounds good but the execution felt like it was written by a child. Quality-Below average Language-repetitive Plot-Could work well but I don't believe at least from the first dozen chapters the author has the skills. Character development-I didn't care to read far enough to see.

Hmm... Good start... I will update my review after I have read more. It seems promising from the first couple of chapters. Quality-good Language-average Plot-interesting Character development-not seen any yet.