No romance or harem at all for the MC.
Hahahah yes. All will be revealed soon.
ch 41 Army
Fantasy · AuthorEgo
Trying to do at least a chapter a day. P.S. Anya the bird will be back!
ch 38 Apex
Fantasy · AuthorEgo
Thanks! That picture of the bird with a wig made my day.
Really nice job, the writing is really easy to read and imagine. The only reason it’s not five stars is because I thought the world and character were too simple/cliche. The cripple bag holder with family in the hospital seems bland, overdone, and didn’t need 5+ chapters to get started. Same thing for the powersystem, I wish you had shown how it worked in the first couple chapters instead of simply telling us what was happening around the world. Only giving a critique because it was truly great writing, and I think this has really good potential. My only wish is for you give the backstory/world building more originality and showing through dialogue or action rather than telling through narration.
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It seems that good taste begets good writing. Your style is very clean, and easy to understand and visualize. I love a good eastern villain. The critique I have is it feels like there should have been a chapter or two prior to explain the character and the world through a possible action scene, reincarnation, or tragedy plot. The world/magic is only as interesting as the character using it. Wonderfully good writing, it just needs your special twist on the genre/magic system and a little more understanding of the character’s motives.
Legend of Royal Soul Cultivation
Fantasy · Asxre